I'm a technical guy. I know nothing about marketing and how to speak to people who are not technical about my ideas.

Recently, I've been working on a side project which is nearly finished. I'm building the homepage and I have a hard time finding the wording that will make non-technical or semi-technical people know what it's about.

This is what I have so far: http://discrete.li/

So I'll explain my service to you, technical people:

It's basically google analytics but only for AJAX requests. You plant some javascript code on your web application, and my service logs every AJAX request your application makes. The problem this is solving is analytics for single page applications. I have found current analytics solutions to be inadequate for large SPAs. In google analytics, for example, you would need to manually track every AJAX request.

Sure, you can use server side logging, but you can say the same thing about page views, and still everyone are using google analytics... it's not trivial and people are using services to make it easy for them.

Plus, my service also tracks errors so you will have the client side data when researching issues. Also, it automatically tracks request latency (again, from the client side so you get a clear view of user experience), and full searchable payload logs.

Is my technical explanation clear? Does the homepage present this service in a good way?

thanks for any help...