Ask HN: What suggestion you can give me to improve my article?

1 points by Immortal333 5 years ago | 2 comments

Hi, HN I have started writing a blog with my friends. I would like you to give some suggestions to improve our blog's quality such that It can be helpful to others.

First article: https://hackeregg.github.io/2020/06/03/Implementing-a-Simple-Redirection-Analytics.html

Any constructive criticism is welcomed.

27182818284 5 years ago |

I didn't read the entire blog post, but from the first few lines I can tell that English is not your native language. It is pretty good, but there are enough mistakes that it stands out.

Immortal333 5 years ago | |

Yes, English is not my native language. I think I can tell someone to proofread it and correct my mistakes. Thanks for your feedback.