Need help in refining the pitch for an idea that I'm developing. Would love to know what you are able to understand from this short description.

"Banjarey is a mobile app that allows travelers to capture & share their group travel experiences collaboratively, as well as get quick & specific information about places & things to do while travelling. It integrates the 2 things people use their mobile for while traveling, at a single place. A good way to understand this would be to mash Tripadvisor (with a better way for travelers to get information than “reviews & ratings”) with Path (for group experiences) "