"Please Remove All Mannered Prose" and Other LLM Incantations(matthewritch.com) |
"Please Remove All Mannered Prose" and Other LLM Incantations(matthewritch.com) |
It is as if Fable skipped any basic writing class, but went straight to poetry, advertising-copy and CEO-speak classes and somehow combined them.
After half a day of giving feedback, instead of work, the skill finally clicked.
Now Fable reviews and rewrites every single one of its own responses, without me ever having to ask. On my dime.
I found the most efficient feedback was being ruthless on the simplest shortest sentences which had any over complication or ambiguity. And occasionally, giving it back a rewrite of one of those long running sentences that is mulch the whole way.
Then tell it to update its skill, and rewrite. Over and over.
It has been a profound relief.
If I ever read "the X's own Y" again, or a five word sentence that somehow needs to be structured as "First second: third fourth fifth.", I don't know what I might do. Just give me some aspirin and m-dashes, straight up —— please!